(English text after the Norwegian text)

Hun reiser seg fra asken.
Hun vet ikke om hun er død eller levende.
Øynene føles som kull.
Hennes kropp kan hun ikke kjenne igjen.
Hun lytter.
Føler etter hjerterytme sin.
Det er tomt.
Føles tungt.
Er det mørkt?
Hvilken sorg var hun?
Hvilken smerte ble hun?
Hvilken kjærlighet skal hun velge?
Hun går utover landskapet som skinner.
Hun ser en elv.
Hun løfter blikket.
Hun ser grønne enger rundt elven.
Ved elven under et tre står en mann.
Hun ser seg tilbake og en sorg fyller hele
hennes sjel.
Bak henne er det varmt og flammer kastes
mot henne.
som blafrer.
Hun skimter farger av oransje, gul og rød
Det gjør vondt.
Hun har kommet til livets slutt.
Hvilken vei skal hun velge?
Hun velger å gå mot mannen.
Han strekker sine hender mot henne.
Hun nøler et øyeblikk.
Livet vises i revy i hennes hode.
Det er ingenting å gå tilbake til.
Hun velger en fremmed dør.
Den åpnes.
Hun føler håp og glede.
Arrene skal gro.
Hun lever.
🦋
-Lillian-
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Up from the ashes…
She gets up from the ashes
She doesn’t know if she’s dead or alive
The eyes feel like coal
She can’t recognize her body
She listens
Feeling her heartbeat
It is empty
Feels heavy
Is it dark
What grief was she
What pain did she get
What love should she choose
She goes beyond the landscape that shines
She sees a river
She lifts her eyes
She sees green meadows around the river
At the river under a tree stands a man
She looks back and a sorrow fills her whole
soul
against her
Behind her it is hot and flames are thrown
against her
She glimpse the colors of orange, yellow and
red that flutter
It hurts
She has come to the end of life
Which way should she choose
She chooses to go against the man
He stretches his hands toward her
She hesitates for a moment
Life is shown in revue in her mind
There is nothing to go back to
She chooses a foreign door
It opens
She feels hope and joy
The scars must grow
She is alive
🦋
-Lillian-
I like the happy ending ❤️ hugs
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Awe, you are so sweet, thank you so much Ilona, you fill my heart with joy❤️
Enjoy🦋thank you so much for your time and your feedback, I appreciate🦋
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God kveld!
Jeg vet ikke hvorfor, men hjertet mitt er rykkete!
Denne følelsen er den samme som før …
Takk i kveld!!
ありがとうございます
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Thank you so much🦋You fill my heart with joy, thank you for your support, I really appreciate it.
I wish you a wonderful day.
Tusen takk.
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Du har en stor talang🤞
いつもありがとう!
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Awe, thank you so much, you are so kind, and I really appreciate🦋Your feedback is mean a lot to me.
Du gjør meg glad
(You make me happy)
Thank you.
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You make me happy.
ありがとう😊
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🦋
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ありがとうございます m(_ _)m
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Thank you🦋
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outstanding
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That was quite a compliment, thank you so much🦋I feel humbled and honored.
I hope you have a wonderful day.
Enjoy.
LikerLiker
Wonderful poem of hope and healing, a great ending Lillian, very well written.🙂😺🌞
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Thank you Steve🦋I am so grateful for your support, and I appreciate your kind word. I hope your day is wonderful.
I visit your blog tomorrow Steve🦋
Enjoy.
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Thanks so much Lillian, I hope it is warming up there in Norway, look forward to your visit tomorrow!😃😺
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The snow that came yesterday is gone again fortunately, the trees are green and the sun is warming, it is spring now🦋 soon summer I hope.
🦋
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It’s going to be a long time yet before our trees get leaves, very late this year which will make for a short summer.😕😁😸
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This is really stunning! The ending is so beautiful and vivid and I saw all of this in my mind!
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Thank you, I am speechlees🦋 thank you so much, I am so grateful… Your feedback is means more to me than you can imaginez
I hope you have a wonderful day🦋
LikerLiker
Great poem and amazing flow 👍 touch of hope despite the pain ❤️
Thank you for sharing 😊
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Awe, thank you so much🦋you touch my heart.
I hope you have a wonderful day.
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😊😊have a wonderful day as well 💕
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Thank you🦋
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🦋🦋🌞
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😊
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Husband says, “sounds like a dream playing itself out” lovely read, Lillian.
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Good morning, that was quite a compliment to wake up to🦋thank you so much, I will always remember those words. I wish you a wonderful day.
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Awesome poem, especially the ending!
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Thank you, I am so happy for your support🦋you warm my heart.
I hope you have a wonderful day.
LikerLiker
De skal gro, kjære deg ♥️
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Vakre Tonje, ja, du har helt rett❤️jeg er takknemlig for at du er deg vennen🦋stor klem til deg💞
LikerLiker
💙🙏🏻
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❤️🦋
LikerLiker
Lillian, your words are filled with such real images. Reading your poetry makes for a intriguing journey. Thanks for sharing.
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This was quite a compliment, I am speechless, thank you so much. I really appreciate, you are so kind🦋I wish you wonderful day.
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