OrkidedatterPicture is me…

(This is an acrostic poem)

~F R A G I L E~

F ear through glistening stars playing hide & seek in the darkness

R oars deep within her soul a thunderous deal of the devil’s rage

A ngels fighting inside her pounding heartbeats with the mystique from the broken dreams

G hostly they whirled around to find peace in a wrecked country girl

I mmersed with purple velvet in a coffin of crystal tears from a fallen warrior

L ying in the shade of her rose thorns of demons

E motions running wild in her veins like dark arrows pierced her mind.


28 kommentarer om “Fragile

  1. This poem is beautiful! I love how you have used the letters; heartfelt! Also when I came back to WordPress some weeks ago, it was all messed up and I didn’t get notifications for many of my favourite bloggers. So, I will catch up soon!
    How have you been?? I hope you are doing well! Take care❤️😊

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    1. Awe, thank you so much beautiful soul, your feedback is much appreciated, happy to see you.
      Well, I’m ok…. but I haven’t posted for a while…
      I hope you are well and safe.
      Take care❤️


  2. S See
    T Truth
    R Real
    O Only
    N No
    G Grief
    Hello Dear Fragile
    Lillian Orchard FLoWeR..
    i’ve Missed.. YouR Poetry…
    Your Face Says Even More
    Of Who You Are For Our Flesh
    iS HeART Beats Our Free Songs
    Dance Coming First SPiRiT Blood LoVE Unafraid
    Head to Toe SoUL Never With Any Lies of Human
    Made Clothes Disguising Who We aRe Breath of
    EartH Seeds Star Burst Crucible Fire Death Explosions Naked Resurrecting
    Stars We aRe Verily Again FLoWeRS SeNTieNT STaR DusT Seeds True Standing
    Tall Or Abused
    Or Neglected
    For those
    Who Do
    Not See
    That Even
    Grains of Sands
    And Below Are Stars
    of Beauty True.. Yes.. Nature’s
    Face You Are God’s Face God’s Beauty LiVinG
    Breath No Myth Just Who You Are my FRiEnD..:)

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  3. Good morning Lillian! What wonderful words you have penned from this amazing word. So nice to see your picture, more beautiful than the words you write. I have missed your poems, keep writing Lillian! I hope you are all well. I am finally over this virus though it has weakened me a lot and it will take a while to get back to normal again. Have a wonderful day Lillian!😃😺🌞

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    1. Hi Steve, good morning from a cold spring day in Norway.
      I’m always so happy for your support, thank you so much beautiful soul.
      I’m sorry to hear you are sick, but I understand you are better. I’m sending you a lot if hugs and love, I hope you will feel much better soon.
      Take care Steve, it was so nice to hear from you 😀💜

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      1. Good morning Lillian! It is a cold spring day here too, yesterday we had new snow covering the ground in the morning but it did melt later in the day.
        My pleasure Lillian, always so nice to have you back with your poetry.
        I’m officially over this virus now, but it really wore out my body so I am still so tired all the time. I’m not sure if I will ever get back to normal.
        I hope you have a wonderful day Lillian, please keep in touch!😃😺🌞

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      2. Yes, I agree, things are not going to be the same as it was before this virus. So sad. It’s so nice to have the beauty of nature right close by though, really helps.🙂😺🌳🌲

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  4. Hi Lillian! How are you?😃 Great to see your works after a long gap, 😍Amazing Poem, loved the way you have penned it. Is that you in the picture, I thought that’s a painting. You look like you stuck in time travel. You look beautiful and very young😍. I have missed your poems, Looking forward for more poems 😊🤗 I hope all is well, Stay safe from Corona🤗. Have a wonderful day Lillian!😊🤗✨💐

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    1. Hi Simon, nice to see you again. I’m ok, just realy busy… and yes, it is me in the picture, taken summer 2019 of a good friend.
      Awe, thank you so much for your kind words, I’m blushing…
      I’m safe and I hope you are too❤️
      Make you a great day.

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      1. Glad to know that you are okay. It’s ok to be busy 😉👍 In the end we should always do something to keep ourselves busy. Stay safe from Corona✨ We have seen the charts of Norway it looks better. They had controlled it so good ✨👍 Good for you all. Take care.🤗 looking forward for your poem’s.😍

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