Off guard – a shout in the dark
unusual – hunted down
wounded – crumbling
heartbeat – gushing blood
licking herself on the lips
always been different
her past
the hunting
thirsty
hunger
sunrise behind the mountains
jumping down from her secret place
running
she is tearing apart
piece by piece goes up in smoke and the
dust is taken by the wind
at the river she watch herself in the water
long hair like the midnight sun’s color play
green eyes that sparkle like emeraldes
lips like a witch
tongue skilled in ink
a body like the white night turns
upside down
she shudders
inadequate
thouch the shining water
despises herself
shadows that threaten the landscape
not safe
embraces herself with pain
a predator – she feel it like a sin
a destiny – in the darkness
it was more than she could take
as, another warrior falls
Orkidedatter.
Oh wow!! This was amazing & powerful!! ❤ I'm in awe of your words!!
By the way, I'm not sure why WordPress was showing that I wasn't following you. I never unfollowed you. Hmmm…. anyway, I wanted you to know so if you saw my name pop up, that's why. 🙂
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Hello, I am so glad you liked it. You fill my heart with so much joy, thank you.
I don’t know what is happening. I have problems with my blog … but wp don’t know what it is…
I hope I follow you too🌸
but I haven’t been so active on blog now …sorry.
I deeply appreciate you and your kind words❤️
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No worries about being quiet. Glad to see you back!!
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Enjoy your day or evening.
Take care.
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Omg! This is amazing! I love the feeling here! Strong and powerful and forceful! Bold and dramatic! And the visuals are clear and crisp and stunning! Beautiful piece! Well done! ❤
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Oh my oh my… I have to catch my breath Nathan… you are so kind to me, I have to wipe away my tears…
Thank you my friend. I am so happy to see you.
❤️🎶❤️
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Amazing poem Lillian! Such vivid imagery, the words literally jump to life so we can see everything going on, giving such a strong picture of this girl and all that is going on in her mind. So well done Lillian, hope you have a wonderful Friday!😀😺🌞🍁🍂
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Steve, I am so happy to see you here. Thank you so much. Means a lot to me.
I wish you a great day and weekend.
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My pleasure Lillian!
I hope you also have a great day today!😁😸🌞🍁🍂
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Sometimes life, we feel back and see our reflection . . . filled with darkness we inherited from our past. Your words bring such thoughts to my mind.
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You made my day, thank you, I deeply appreciate it.
I think it is nice when a reader get that feeling & thoughts.
I wish you a great weekend.
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Nice. I see a woman trying escape. Hurt and bleeding…
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Oh wow.. thank you my lovely soul. I wish you a great weekend❤️
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Happy weekend to you too ❤️
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My comment on your Little green of Norway…
Wow Lillian! Norway is far far better than what i imagined. I’ve googled it before it was more like film scenes. I loved it the way you have shown it to us. Love the back waters sea and the mountains. Honestly jealous of your sunrise 🤓 and the northern lights are such a eye treat, does it happen everyday? It’s a dream for us people living in the busy city. You are lucky to live in this place 😍👏 Thanks for treating our eyes with your beautiful pictures.🥰 Wish you a great weekend🙂
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I tried to show pictures from Norway that you can’t find on google …and Norway is much much nature.
Thank you for your lovely comment😊
No, northern lights does not happen every day, but often. Often in the north. In south it is rare, but can happen.
I am grateful, because I live in the forrest in Norway. It is so so beautiful here.
Have a great weekend.
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Hey Lillian! Loved the art first. Must say the Lion from your previous post and another lion with a woman face on it. You have a unique style of portraying your imagination. My god and the poem is an amazing work, well written the emotions and pain, the best i read in my recent time. Could relate with your paint work much🤓✨👏👌 Wish you an awesome weekend✨🤗
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Wow, that was quite a compliment, thank you so much.
I am deeply grateful to you. You see my art and how it is matches the words, I always try to do that. And I always try to be different than others, because I am me. And i have find myself in my art now. I am happy.
Thank you again and take care.
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Painful thought of a girl! 😊
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Thank you so much, I am so happy you stop by.
I wish you a great weekend.
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You are very welcome and have a great weekend too! 💙
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Just lovely! Glad to see you writing again. 😊
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❤️
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SMiles Lillian Your words Bring
Moving Pictures to my Soul as
These Two Poems You Write
Reflect the ‘She Wolf’ Myth
of the Saving Wolf
oF A Village of
Love Wherever
that Village may Be
Housed in Vehicles and
Vessels of Love a Song by
Sia then called ‘She Wolf’ from
2012 Your Words Inhabit Here
to me.. off to the Next Part of
the Words You Bring Deeper
As She Wolf Will See my Friend.:)
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Oh wow, that was quite a respons to wake up to, thank you. I am so grateful to you🎶🐺🎶
I wish you a great day.
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SMiLes my Pleasure It is
A Bit Like Church visiting
Your Poetry..:)
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❤️🎶❤️
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❤️😁🌼
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Being it different is something to proud of❤️
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Yes, you absolutely rigth my friend❤️and it hard sometimes… and it can hurt, but still, never change or live your life like others… or after others say to you…❤️🎶❤️I wish you a great day.
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Yes, specialy is hard when flash back comes unexpected❤, but now all is fine right?💛Have an inspiring day🤗😊
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Thank you, you are so kind, I wish you a lovely day❤️
And you know, I love to write poems and swim in all words and emotions …so I will write today🎶
LikerLiker
wonderful
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Thank you, means a lot.
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