Off guard – a shout in the dark

unusual – hunted down

wounded – crumbling

heartbeat – gushing blood

licking herself on the lips

always been different

her past

the hunting



sunrise behind the mountains

jumping down from her secret place


she is tearing apart

piece by piece goes up in smoke and the

dust is taken by the wind

at the river she watch herself in the water

long hair like the midnight sun’s color play

green eyes that sparkle like emeraldes

lips like a witch

tongue skilled in ink

a body like the white night turns

upside down

she shudders


thouch the shining water

despises herself

shadows that threaten the landscape

not safe

embraces herself with pain

a predator – she feel it like a sin

a destiny – in the darkness

it was more than she could take

as, another warrior falls


34 kommentarer om “Reflection…

  1. Oh wow!! This was amazing & powerful!! ❤ I'm in awe of your words!!

    By the way, I'm not sure why WordPress was showing that I wasn't following you. I never unfollowed you. Hmmm…. anyway, I wanted you to know so if you saw my name pop up, that's why. 🙂

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    1. Hello, I am so glad you liked it. You fill my heart with so much joy, thank you.
      I don’t know what is happening. I have problems with my blog … but wp don’t know what it is…
      I hope I follow you too🌸
      but I haven’t been so active on blog now …sorry.
      I deeply appreciate you and your kind words❤️


  2. Omg! This is amazing! I love the feeling here! Strong and powerful and forceful! Bold and dramatic! And the visuals are clear and crisp and stunning! Beautiful piece! Well done! ❤

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  3. Amazing poem Lillian! Such vivid imagery, the words literally jump to life so we can see everything going on, giving such a strong picture of this girl and all that is going on in her mind. So well done Lillian, hope you have a wonderful Friday!😀😺🌞🍁🍂

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  4. My comment on your Little green of Norway…

    Wow Lillian! Norway is far far better than what i imagined. I’ve googled it before it was more like film scenes. I loved it the way you have shown it to us. Love the back waters sea and the mountains. Honestly jealous of your sunrise 🤓 and the northern lights are such a eye treat, does it happen everyday? It’s a dream for us people living in the busy city. You are lucky to live in this place 😍👏 Thanks for treating our eyes with your beautiful pictures.🥰 Wish you a great weekend🙂

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    1. I tried to show pictures from Norway that you can’t find on google …and Norway is much much nature.
      Thank you for your lovely comment😊
      No, northern lights does not happen every day, but often. Often in the north. In south it is rare, but can happen.
      I am grateful, because I live in the forrest in Norway. It is so so beautiful here.
      Have a great weekend.

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  5. Hey Lillian! Loved the art first. Must say the Lion from your previous post and another lion with a woman face on it. You have a unique style of portraying your imagination. My god and the poem is an amazing work, well written the emotions and pain, the best i read in my recent time. Could relate with your paint work much🤓✨👏👌 Wish you an awesome weekend✨🤗

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    1. Wow, that was quite a compliment, thank you so much.
      I am deeply grateful to you. You see my art and how it is matches the words, I always try to do that. And I always try to be different than others, because I am me. And i have find myself in my art now. I am happy.
      Thank you again and take care.

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  6. SMiles Lillian Your words Bring
    Moving Pictures to my Soul as
    These Two Poems You Write
    Reflect the ‘She Wolf’ Myth
    of the Saving Wolf
    oF A Village of
    Love Wherever
    that Village may Be
    Housed in Vehicles and
    Vessels of Love a Song by
    Sia then called ‘She Wolf’ from
    2012 Your Words Inhabit Here
    to me.. off to the Next Part of
    the Words You Bring Deeper
    As She Wolf Will See my Friend.:)

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    1. Yes, you absolutely rigth my friend❤️and it hard sometimes… and it can hurt, but still, never change or live your life like others… or after others say to you…❤️🎶❤️I wish you a great day.


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