Mysterious rooms

(English text after the Norwegian text)

Hun er som et stort hus

Med mange rom som ikke er funnet ennå

Ingen som vil

Ingen er modig nok

Ingen ønsker å grave i henne

Det er ikke mistet

Bare gjemt

Mistet kontrollen

Lever på kanten

Blir kuttet

Kan slukke lyset

Dårlig i kjærlighet

Som et spøkelse

Går hun igjen hos deg

Gjennom vegger og tak

Begraver sin sjel innenfor deg

Ønsker seg hjem

Ingen kan gi

hun er trøtt av å være normal

vil være usynlig

bare litt til

ingen tørr….



Mysterious rooms…

She’s like a big house

with many rooms not found yet

no one wants to

no one is not brave enough

no one have a desire to dig into her

it’s not lost

just hidden

lost controll

on the edge

had been cut into pieces

can turn off the light

bad at love

like a ghost she haunts you

through walls and ceilings

she buries her soul within you

she wants a home

no one can give her

she is tired of being normal

will be invisible a little bit

-because no one dares-

she is too mysterious


53 kommentarer om “Mysterious rooms

  1. Wow! What a magical person!! She is too mysterious! I love that! I got goosebumps just thinking about her! Wonderfully and lovingly and vividly described! Thank you for sharing this, Lillian!!! So lovely ❤ ❤ ❤

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    1. Woooow, woooow, I’ve missed you❤️
      I’ve been so worried about you … yes, ok…enough about that…
      I am so so happy to see you Nathan…
      yes, she is magical, mysterious, wonderful and loving person.. I know her very well😉
      Thank you for your kind words.. wow, goosebumps… that was quite a compliment…
      I deeply appreciate it❤️
      I will visit your blog later… feels like «rush hour»… see you❤️


  2. Sometimes we need to dig down deep inside of someone to truly see who they are, to understand a little bit better and to truly love. But she is definitely worth the effort! Wonderfully written once again Lillian!! I hope you have had a wonderful day!😃😺🌞🌳

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    1. Wow, Hello Steve, I am so happy to see you here. I have tried several times to visit your blog today, but it all went white… I will try again now.
      Yes… she is worth the effort…😉
      Thank you Steve, I always so happy for your comments.
      My day is fine.
      Take care😺

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  3. Chambers of Soul We Nautilus Spiral Co-Create Evolving
    Art Across A Lifespan From First Breath to Last Blink Eternally
    Now Endless Door Ways into Chamber Rooms of Past Good News
    Always is More Chamber Rooms to Move Connect and Co-Create
    A Journey
    of our Life
    So Many Outreached
    Branches of our Trees NoW iN
    Life So Many Leaves BLoWinG
    iN A SPiRiT oF Wind Some Leaves
    Fertilize Leaves Below Some Leaves
    Blow Away.. Never to Be Seen Again..
    Other Leaves New Reborn Extending
    Branches More.. A Key Build And Tolerate
    And Accept Roots That Hold Us Up A Spine
    of Spiraling Chambers With Rooms Narrow oF Old too.. Shades
    of Dark Highlight Beauty oF SHeLL ArT EVeN MoRE iN LiGHT NoW
    Other than
    Poem Lillian
    Hope Your Evening
    is Going Well in Norway…:)

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  4. I always enjoy your lovely poetry, but the picture that goes along with it has really captured my imagination. I can see numerous images within it. Every brush stroke tells a story.

    Have a great day.

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  5. I love the depths of your love expressed ….. it takes deep love, courage, and selflessness to love, to understand the mystery of another mind and heart. Wow LOVE. The most powerful force ever. ❤️

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