The sky is crying

(Engelsk text after Norwegian text)

Hvis jeg bare visste

dagene gled forbi

gode ting varer aldri

himmelen gråter på ansiktet mitt

jeg endrer disse dråpene til tårer

jeg føler at jeg er ferdig

mørket har vunnet

jeg er på villspor

det kan rive min sjel fra hverandre

i hjertet har du blitt igjen

jeg tar mine skjøre vinger og flyr avsted

jeg kan ikke gjemme meg

jeg kan ikke flykte

la oss gå tapt tilsammen

i smerte

til lyset kommer å strømmer

gjennom mine øyne og du og jeg

kan du danse i mørkets flammer.

🦋

-Orkidedatter-

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The sky is crying

If I only knew

the days were slipping past

good things never last

heaven is crying into my face

I changes this drops into tears

I feel like I am done

the darkness has won

I am lost

it can tear my soul apart

in my heart you have remained

I take my fragile wings and fly away

I can`t hide

I can`t run

let get lost togheter

in the pain

til the light comes pouring

through my eyes you and I can

dance in flames of the darkness.

🦋

-Orkidedatter-

-Lillian-

33 kommentarer om “The sky is crying”

  2. Mmmmmmm so good. I love that ending. «Let’s get lost together.» How vivid and sweet and powerful. Just running and running. Sounds so pleasant 🙂

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    1. Wow, that was a very very nice feedback. I love the way you interprets my poems, thank you so much🦋you really touch my heart. «Just running and running» – yes, I think that is so pleasent….can you imagine….
      Enjoy your day.

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  5. Loves That Last Loves that
    Go Loves that Return
    Who Never
    Goes
    Away
    Smiles my
    Friend Humanity
    Lives now with this
    Affliction of Love As
    Humanity Dies With
    This Affliction of
    Love indeed
    is born
    Again as
    Light Returns to:
    From: Darkest Days of Night

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  6. Another wonderful poem Lillian, you truly write from your heart and soul so that every part becomes real and alive, from pain to hope and love as well. And another great art piece there Lillian. Thanks for sharing.🙂

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  7. Oh my! How you portray pain and boy did I feel it, Lillian. Your painting is so vividly full of pain as well. How your Heart must have cried when you drew and wrote this. A sensitive artist knows both the highs and the lows and with this post, you described so well what it is like to be torn asunder. Powerful just powerful!! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

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    1. You fill my heart with so much joy Amy🌹thank you so much. That’s how a great readers read my poem. I am so grateful🦋 You interprets my poem so well.
      I am so happy for your support and feedback, thank you so much❤️
      Bless you.
      Enjoy your day.

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  9. This is painfully beautiful. I don’t know what to say. The images and the metaphors you used fit so well. Words touched me. This is one of your best creations till date❤️

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    1. I am speechlees, you hit my heart with your words. You warm my heart❤️touch my soul, thank you so much🦋 I am so honored and grateful for your feedback and support. Thank you❤️
      I wish you a wonderful day.

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      1. You make me speechless with your magical words and I mean it. The idea itself is so great and I felt the words. Keep going, Lillian. Have a nice day ahead☺️

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