(English text after the Norwegian)
Når hun snakker med deg
trigger du hennes følelser.
Når hun snakker med deg
trigger du hennes erfaringer
og opplevelser.
Når hun snakker med deg
trigger du «livet».
Det er som kniver blir hugget
inn i hennes hjerte
og piggtråd som strammer til
langt inn i hennes hjerte.
Hjertet blør og hennes sjel
vrir seg i smerte.
Det er vondt.
Deres blodsbånd er usynlig,
men for henne alltid bundet.
Det er vondt.
Hun tar et skritt tilbake,
og lar giftige ord passere forbi.
Hun hilser de velkomne, men
lar de gå.
Det er som en kald vinternatt
der isstapper så spisse som
piler blir kastet inn i hennes hud.
Det svir og brenner, og arrene
er.
De begynner å falme, hjerte hennes gror
og sjelen blomstrer.
Hun snur ryggen til og går, men
følelsen av alltid være udugelig,
skyld og skam sitter som
brent fast i hennes ånd.
-Orkidedatter-
//
Poisonous words.
When she talks to you,
you arouses her feelings.
When she talks to you,
you arouses her experiences.
When she talks to you, you arouses
her whole «life», she try to heal.
It is like knives being carved
in her heart and barbed wire
that tightens into her heart.
The heart bleeds and her soul
is twisted in pain.
It hurts.
Their blood band is invisible,
but for her it always bound.
It hurts.
She takes a step back and
lets poisonous words pass by.
She welcomes they, and let it go.
It is like a cold winter’s night
that icicles flies like arrowheads
thrown into her skin.
It burns, and the scars have a pain
she can’t describe.
They begin to fade,
the heart of her heals,
and the soul is flourishing.
She turns her back to the
words of poison
and goes away, but
the feeling of being always
inept, guilt and shame
is like burned in to her spirit.
-Orkidedatter-
The power of words! They can either build or destroy
Beautiful share for painful feeling 👍
LikerLikt av 3 personer
Thank you so much for reading and your lovely words🦋You interpret it so nice, and you warm my heart.
Goodnight from Norway⭐️
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It was great reading it! I wrote something similar in Arabic…
Good night from Beirut 😊
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💙🙏🏻
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❤️tusen takk, du gleder mitt hjerte🦋
LikerLiker
good one….one single word….can change everything
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Good morning from Norway🦋
Thank you for reading, I am so happy for your support.
I wish you a wonderful day.
LikerLiker
Words can truly be a poison and can cut more deeply than a knife, and can cause more pain than other wounds. But good to know that the wounds can heal and a good life can return even if the memory still remains. You have a wonderful way of writing to express what is in the heart. It will be morning for you by the time you read this, so good morning from Muffin and I!😃😺
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Good morning, and thank you for your lovely feedback. I really appreciate your words… they are so meaninful and wise with a rhythm from your heart.
I wish you and Muffin a wonderful day🦋
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Good morning Orchid! Thanks for your kind words. Our day is just beginning, the bear is outside but staying in the shadows so I can’t get a picture of him. Muffin is a bit scared again. Have a wonderful day!😃😺
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Wow, That is quite a experience🦋They are so majestically.
Enjoy.
Hug to Muffin, is not a good feeling…
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Thanks Lillian, I think Muffin has finally settled down,😸 the bear has gone, everything is quiet again, and daylight is beginning to show. Soon I will need to go out and feed the birds. Looks like another nice sunny day, but a bit cooler.😄
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it’s beautiful👍
ありがとうございます!
LikerLiker
This one’s so powerful! Beautifully written, Lillian!
Words can make or break relations.
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Awe, thank you so much🦋You are so sweet and kind to me💜 wise words about words you type here, thank you. I wish you a wonderful day.
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My utmost pleasure! Wishing you the same!❤
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🦋
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Beautiful picture. The words of poem are very powerful.
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Thank you so much🦋It is mean more to me than you can imagine.
I wish you a lovely day.
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This is too deep! I love it!
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Hello🦋 that was a lovely message to wake up too🌸Thank you so much, I really appreciate.
I wish you a wonderful day.
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Jeg elsker å lese dette og prøver samtidig å lære litt også.. Jeg kunne gått flere ganger enn jeg klarer, men er blitt flinkere. Digger deg 💗 Du er så flink. Du burde gitt ut samling!! Kyss til deg 💋
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Wow, seriøst, du varmer mitt hjerte Tonje❤️tusen takk, du vet, at dine ord betyr så mye for meg, mer enn du aner, takk🦋 klem
Håper dagen er fin og god mot deg🦋
LikerLiker
❤
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Lillian, your words create such emotion between two souls, filled with pain and hurt. Well done!
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Awe, thank you so much. I feel a little bit honored, and you touch my soul with your feedback, because, you can feel it, it’s mean a lot to me that my poems speaks to you.🦋
I hope you make you a great day.
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Very meaningful poem, you can say a lo in your poems i can feel you thru it❤️
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Awe, that was a very lovely feedback, thank you so much Ilona❤️you touch my soul and warm my heart🦋
LikerLiker
Always so creative and surprising❤️
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You are so lovely Ilona, thank you for your time and comment, you know I really appreciate🦋Enjoy❤️
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