She is chained with barbed wire
in a cage and it will be the
death of her
in an endless emptiness
is an old friend
the sweet grief
she is a mess and her misery
have no end
she is not bulletproof
bending like a broken rose
with thorns stretching up the
sky full of stars
she climbs up to experience endless
heavenly view
a magical mystery ride on her
favorite star
when the world is beating her down
in the cage of defeat.
-Orkidedatter-
美しい😊😊
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Thank you for reading my friend, I really appreciate it😊
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😆✌️
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確かに 😀
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Beautiful poem Lillian
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Thank you. It means a lot to me.
I wish you a wonderful day.
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Pleasure
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nice post…thanks for share
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Thank you for always supporting me, I am really grateful.
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Sometimes we’re not so strong, and we’re certainly not bullet proof!
Perfectly expressed ❤
have a great time 😊
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Thank you Huguette, you warm my heart with your word❤️
A perfect reader to my poem my friend.
Enjoy your day.
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It’s always a pleasure reading your great work ❤️😊
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Wow, that was quite a compliment. Thank you❤️
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❤️❤️😊
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Great poem! Amazingly portrayed ❤
P. S. What does your title mean? 🙂
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Cage of defeat it is a meaning of how I feel. I feel I am trapped in a cage with all my sorrows…
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What does orkidadattor mean? 🙂
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Hello.
Orkidedatter is Orchid daughter in English.
You know, the flower.. and what that flower means in the flower arrangement in our nature. plus some other personal stuff for me❤️
I hope you are well.
Enjoy your day.
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❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you my friend, I deeply appreciate it❤️
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We are all vulnerable, more in some days than others, but vulnerable just the same! Beautifully written 💕
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Thank you❤️I deeply appreciate it❤️
Enjoy your day.
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‘MaGiC MysTerY TouRS’
Verily TRuE Experience
That the Beatles most
definitely refer to as Real TRuENoW
A Way Out of DaRK ETeRNaL NoW
LiGHT oh how to
Travel Ah
How
to Arrive
Yes how to
Staycation Forevermore
now my FriEnd.. hmm.. ’tis
No Science Alone more Art than ReaSoN
DiViNE Gift of Heaven Within.. TRuE NoW SoME
folks find it through ‘Substances’ others find it
Through Dance And Song Words of Poetry
Essence
oF LoVE
Lit Up
Fumes
of Heaven
Within Escape
True for others
to Smell too if they
have a SCent for Heaven morenow…
Than just A Promise after a DiRT NaP NoW..
Smiles my Friend For Whatever Vine you Find
to Climb i Do Wish Hope And Pray You Staycation
Longer
iN A
LiGHT
oF NiGHT
That Marries An
Eternal NoW DaY oF LoVE..
Honeymooning The Sun as Moon…
Winter’s Fall As Summer’s SPRinG ALWayS ALiVE NoW..:)
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Wow… beautifully written❤️thank you.
You blew me away with your words.
Enjoy your day.
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SMiLes my FriEnd
Your words are
So inspiring🌺🌼😁
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Thank you… 🌸I deeply appreciate it.
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😁😊
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Loved it😊😎😍
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Awwww, thank you my friend, sunshine❤️It really means a lot to me Ilona❤️
You warm my heart.
Enjoy your evening.
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Thank you, I feel honored.
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Wow. This is raw and powerful and beautiful. Sounds like it is spoken through much experience. I was so moved. Your words are so vibrant and evocative!! Thank you for sharing! ❤
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Awwww, you melt my heart Nathan, thank you so much. It means more to me than you can imagine❤️and that is how a good reader read my poems❤️
Enjoy your day.
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I feel honored, thank you so much.
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This is such a sad story told in a most vivid manner. I could actually feel it as I read it.
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Wow, I am so glad that my words speech to you like that. It means a world to me.
Thank you so much.
LikerLiker
Expressed a sad moving of the feeling!💙
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Wow, I am so happy for your support and your kind words, thank you.
Take care❤️
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