(English text after the Norwegian text)
Hun ligger i en seng av drømmer
av mareritt
som en bølge på havet
hennes hår hviler på puta
hun ser ut som en engel
var det noen som sa
kanskje dødens engel
hun kan høre sin sjel hviske
ditt navn
hun har mistet grepet
hul innvendig
salte dråper triller fra hennes
øyne av ærlighet
minner av deg dekker
hennes hjerte
konstant smerte
vil det noen sinne slutte
å gjøre vondt
hver tanke er skygget av deg
hun tar tak i en nål og tråd
prøver å sy igjenn hennes arr
hun vil aldri føle seg såret igjen.
-Orkidedatter-
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Angel of death
She is laying in a bed of dreams
of nightmares
like a wave on the ocean her
hair rests on the pillow
she looks like an angel
someone said
maybe the angel of death
she can hear her soul whisper
your name
she has lost her way
hollow inside
salty drops falling from her
eyes of honesty
memories of you cover her heart
constant pain
will it ever stop hurting
every thought is shadowed by you
she grabs a needle and thread
tries to sew her scars
she will never feel hurt again.
-Orkidedatter-
Wonderful! 😊
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Thank you, I really appreciate…❤️
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Welcome 😊
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Beautiful, so good! I feel silly leaving these little words when you have shared something so amazing!
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Oh, no, don’t do that… I love your kind words❤️I deeply appreciate it. I put every kind words back to my heart, and my heart heals because of that. Thank you so much.
I wish you a wonderful day.
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This is so powerful and poignant actually! It reaches the soul and heart! Great share dear Lillian ❤
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You touch my heart and soul, thank you so much, I am so glad my words speak to you, thank you❤️
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Sure they do 👌
My pleasure 😊❤️
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❤️
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Lillian, in a poem such as this, your words always find a genuine emotional edge. The poem is filled with such sorrow, yet there is also hope for a better future at the end.
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Woah
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Thank you, I am appreciate your support, always. I am glad my words speak to you that way.
Enjoy.
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🤗
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SMiLes i’ve Seen ‘this Angel of Death’ Down Close and
Personal too.. no one sees this Angel of Death for
This Death is Within A Lack of Feeling/Sensing
Complete This Death is attached to Symbols
Perhaps
Words
or
Even
Flesh and Blood now..
Smiles my Friend Now
i Dance all the Angels
of Death Away They
Were only iLLusions
As they become
Corpses
only i own
my Spirit Now
my HeART my Soul
i choose to give and
share breathing no one will ever
take away what was is always now
mine from Birth to Give and Share Now
Free A Key is RiSinG Over SiNKinG A Dance
And Song of Soul Will Feel And Fill a Pyramid
Up to Wisdom Beauty and Truth of Love Capstone Again Light Within..
After That Those who Choose Communion With Us/me Will or Will not..:)
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I feel honored, and I am so grateful for your kind words and dance.
Bless you.
I wish you a wonderful day.
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SMiLes
my Friend
You Welcome
me.. Sadly i Find
Most of
The
World Disappointing
This Way Never the less i
Understand why and
Who has a Gift to
Give
And
Share
Free no
Matter
Welcome
Arms of
Humanity Warm
Or Cold Alive Now..
It is always those
Who Give and
Share no
Matter
Dark
Thru
Light
Who Truly
Live Life as Gift..:)
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❤️
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😇😁
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she can hear her soul whisper/your name
What a beautiful image! I just couldn’t stop thinking about what that must feel like and what that must sound like. So poignant! Really well done! Ugh. and the title! And the picture! How moving!
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Awe, you made my day complete❤️wow, thank you so much for your feedback. Awe, you tuch my soul with your words, because this poem means something extra special to me and then it is extra touching what you say about it.
Thank you.
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Beautiful ❤️❤️
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Thank you so much, I deeply appreciate it❤️
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Really felt it!
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Thank you. I deeply appreciate it.
I wish you a wonderful day.
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You too!
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Så fine ord ♥️ Klem
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Tusen takk vennen❤️jeg er så takknemlig❤️klem
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