(English text after the Norwegian text)

I natt var du en panter.
Et av de vakreste dyr i verden, men også
et av de farligste.
Listet deg rundt i mørkets natur
med glitrende pels og lysende øyne.
Du jaktet.
Sirklet inn ditt bytte.
Stillheten er til å ta og føle på.
Du strakte ut din pote,
vasket den forsiktig,
før du plantet den i det våte underlaget.
Du luktet ut i natten.
Slikket deg om munnen
og hoppet opp i nærmeste tre.
Øverst lå du og så utover landskapet.
Følte på sult, hunger og lyst.
Du må drepe i natt for å overleve.
Du lukket øynene, en panter var din skjebne
i dette liv.
Du ble angrepet, knuste kyss og hjertet revet ut.
Ingen magi.
Ingen vakre ord.
Ingen som bryr seg.
Ingen savn, bare kaldt, mørkt og vått.
Stille går du fra stedet.
Denne gangen mett.
Du vant denne kampen.
Du smyger deg hjem.
Legger deg ned.
Slikker dine sår.
Du vet at det ikke er lenge til
neste hunger
neste lengsel
neste lyst
neste kamp.
Dø eller overlev…
-Orkidedatter-
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Panther
Last night you were a panther.
One of the most beautiful animals in the world, but also
one of the most dangerous.
Listed around in the nature of darkness
with glittering coat and shining eyes.
You hunted.
Circle your prey.
You can feel the silence.
You stretched out your paw,
washed it gently,
before planting it in the wet surface.
You smelled in the night.
Licked your mouth
and jumped up to the nearest tree.
At the top you looked over the landscape.
Felt hunger, starvation and desire.
You have to kill tonight to survive.
You closed your eyes, a panther was your destiny
in this life.
You were attacked, smashed kisses and the heart torn out.
No magic.
No beautiful words.
No one cares.
No one miss you, just coldness and darkness.
Quietly you go from the place.
This time satisfied.
You won this fight.
You sneak home.
Lie down.
Lick your wounds.
You know it’s not long to the
next hunger
next yearning
next desire
the next battle.
Die or survive…
-Orkidedatter-
Lillian, your words will have me looking behind myself if I ever venture into the darkness. You depicted the essence of the cycle of life in the wild.
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That was quite a compliment🦋You make me so happy and I am so glad that my words speak to you like that. Thank you very much. I really appreciate your support, it means more to me than you can imagine🦋
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I’m sure there might be a slight language barrier and wish I was more fluent. First I wanted to thank you for all your support and kind words! I may have to hunt for it but was wondering if you had an about you page?
My writing may jump around a bit but so does my mind so I go with it LOL
feel free to contact by email should you ever wish to.
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Don’t think about the language, I translate, but sometimes it gets weird when I do, but hope it goes well anyway🦋
It is my pleasure, I have been a big fan of your writings and words, they are so beautiful penned.
That was weird, I have a about me page, but I can’t find it by myself… well-I don’t know where it is, but it is not much about me there anyway. I have a free site..I am sorry🦋
You make me smile, thank you.
Maybe I do, email you. Enjoy.
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great words…heart touching
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Thank you🦋you warm my heart with your words, it means a lot to me. Enjoy your day.
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It’s beautiful and there so many amazing and great phrases used have used…. U described the wild with the bloom of life in it… It’s beautiful
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You bring so much joy into my heart and I am eternally grateful🦋 Thank you so much for your kind words💜
🦋
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Always welcome and thanks to you really… Ur works enlighten me always
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Thank you🦋You warm my heart. I wish you a lovely day.
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Another wonderful piece of art, i love the picture so much and with the poem you just lifted everything in the hight lever❤️
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I am so glad my words speak to you and you give so much joy to my heart🦋I am so grateful for your time and read, thank you so much Ilona, it means more to me than you can imagine💜
Remeber, one day one of this poem and art can be your if you please…🦋 I remember you tell me something in another post….❤️ Enjoy your day🦋
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The law of life in animal nature is that heartbreaking to us. Kill for life. A cycle that they have to fulfill and you shed them with verses that carry that emotion of living their lives. How good your poem.
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Thank you for your sincere and kind words. You filled my heart with joy, and my soul dances in your feedback, because how you interpret it🦋
I am so grateful for your support, it means a lot to me. Enjoy your day.
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Det er godt å skrive 🙂 Klemmer en god onsdagsklem ❤
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Ja, det er helt sant❤️tusen takk🦋klem
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WOW! This is sensational writing. 💗
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wow, this was a quite a compliment🦋Thank you so much, your words warm my heart.
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You’re welcome. 😊
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💙
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❤️
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Heart touching lines…
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You touch my heart with your lovely words, thank you so much🦋Enjoy your day.
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Panther … panther … shadow like movements …
merging with the darkness of the night.
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Wow, and yes, that was quite a feedback, thank you so much, I really appreciate🦋I wish you a wonderful day.
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