(English text after the Norwegian)
Han kom til henne forleden natt
Som en skygge du kravlet oppover hennes
fløyelsmyke hud
Hun følte dine negler skrape borti hennes
hellige grotte
Hun hikstet av nytelse
Hun kvelte sin egen pust
Du jaget henne under stjernene
falt sammen på bakken
rullet henne rundt
din tunge fanget hennes
hun vred seg i dine armer
ikke av frykt
men nytelse
fra de sterke båndene av smerte
slik frykt forsvinner fra mareritt
gjemmer hun seg i sitt knuste hjerte
med en trøst som drar
dypt inne i henne
🦋
-Orkidedatter-
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He came to her the other night
as a shadow he crawled up her
velvety-soft skin
she felt your nails scraping
her holy cave
She sobbed with pleasure
She choked her own breathing
he hunted her under the stars
falling down to the ground
turned her around
his tongue caught hers
twisted in your arms
not of fear
pleasure
from the strong bonds of pain
fears vanish like nightmare
hide in her broken heart
with a solace that lingers
deep inside.
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-Orkidedatter-
Orkidèdatter 
Beautiful and sensual 😊👍 Thank you for sharing
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Awe, thank you for your feedback and comment, it means so much to me🦋
( I posted your nomination you give me yesterday)…
I really enjoy doing it❤️
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Good morning dear Lillian and it’s a pleasure reading your work 🙂 Oh great thank you for informing me, don’t know how I missed it, will check it now ❤
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Hello, and good morning or afternoon it is🦋I really love your feedback, thank you so much.
I think we can not bring with us everything and there are always posts we will lose, at least I am comforting myself with it🦋
I hope you have a wonderful day.
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Good afternoon is now 😊 1.40pm
It’s always a pleasure to interact with you and yes you’re right, so I’ll do my best to not miss important posts, hopefully
Have a wonderful day as well 😊🦋🦋
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Thank you so much,it is mean a lot to me🦋 Enjoy your day, you are so kind, thank you.
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😊😊🦋🦋
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Fint dikt 🙂
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Tusen takk frodith, håper du har en fin kveld❤️klem🦋
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Breathtaking!
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Thank you so much🦋I am so grateful for your read and coment. It means more to me than you can imagine. I hope you enjoy your day.
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Hun kvelte sin egen pust—sounds so lovely! (i googled it :).
This is animal, raw, lusty! Fun to read fast. Shivers! 🧚♀️
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Awe, thank you so much🦋yes, I think so too. I am so grateful that my words speak to you.
I hope you have a great day🦋
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Giggling and blushing feels so nice. 💕 looking forward to your next poem.
🧚♀️
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Awe, you are so sweet, thank you so much💖Enjoy🦋
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Lillian, you found the right combination of words to express beautiful images!
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Wow, that was quite a compliment🦋you touch my heart and soul, I am so grateful, thank you.
I hope you have a wonderful day.
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Lovely poem, Lillian, with such sensual imagery. This is one of my favorites of yours.
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Thank you so much, it’s mean a lot to me🦋I am so grateful that my poems speak to you.
❤️
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This one especially resonates with me, so well done.
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My pleasure🦋
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