He loves her when she
is a secret
Her heart is swelling with
emotions
she twist her tongue and
her blood is rushing
She feels stars in his
eyes
Her lips shape his name
He taste her lust delightful
Bodies lick with motions
Her fingertips on his
chest
He grab her hair and napping
to her neck
She is drowning in his arms
He embraces himself around her
She kisses his lips slowly
He breathes harder
She satisfies all his wants
He smells her desire
She can feel his heartbeat
His fingers dance along
her jaw
whispering something in
her ear
no one else know
Her flames of passion
as you plung within her
depths
and write her into his story.
-Orkidedatter-
wow wonderful sketch
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Thank you do much, that was the idea. I am so glad that my poem speak to you🦋I hope you have a wonderful day.
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You write with such emotion, such feeling in your words that it just brings the poem to life! Well done Lillian! Hope your day has been a great one indeed!😃😺
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Your words mean so much to me Steve, thank you🦋You always filled my heart with so much joy.
I have a great day, soon it is bedtime to me. I wish you a great day too, and I hope Muffin is well😊
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Thanks Lillian! Muffin has been sleeping most of the day, except for her wild time this morning where she really gets rid of energy! It’s a great day, still early here.😃😺
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Enjoy🦋
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Absolutely!😄
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Lillian….. I think I need a Cold Shower whew…. what a scene you painted!! I hope someday I can feel such emotion! Where’s my fan!!!!
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Wow, that was quite a compliment, thank you so much🦋I am so grateful that my words speak to you. It is music in my ears….
I hope one day, I read in one of your posts that you feel such emotion with the lady of your dreams🦋
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I will do my best to make it so!!💜💜
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💜🦋
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Beautiful art and poem, so passionate, romantic and sensual. I think your poetry is very accessible even to those who are not used to reading poems.
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You filled my heart with so much joy🦋thank you so much, and I am agree with you. I am really grateful for your support on my art too, thank you🦋
Enjoy.
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You are very kindly welcome, Lillian.
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Goosebumps. All over. Delightful to read!
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You make me so proud and humbled, thank you so much. I love your words, because they tell me that my words speak to you🦋
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I read it aloud to my husband just now. 👍 big smile on his face. 🧚♀️
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You to kind💜thank you so much🦋tell him thank you from me, and say I am grateful, smile on a face is telling more than a thousand words🦋
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😊
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Beautiful! Such passion!
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Thank you Stuart, I really appreciate your time and read, it means a lot to me🦋I hope you have a beautiful day.
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You are very welcome Lillian! I hope you have a beautiful day too 🙂
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Thank you, it is very beautiful🦋
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I simply got goosebumps!!😊
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Thank you, your words mean a lot to me🦋I wish you a wonderful day.
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You’re very welcome! Have a blissful day!
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Powerful, Lillian!! Between your painting and these words, you made my Heart pound. Par excellent! Just brilliant! Thank you!! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
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Thank you so much for your kind words🦋This feedback tells me that my words speak to you and you interpret it your way and it does something with you, I am so grateful❤️
I hope you have a wonderful day🦋
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Instead of being with my camera which is what I really want to do, I’m outside working in my gardens. Yet, I’m so so trying to smile. LOL Opening these gardens is hard work! 🌱🌱🌱
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Wow. This touched my heart. I will keep this with me and never forget this. Beautiful, just like you are, inside out 💖
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That is quit a compliment, thank you so much🦋You touch my heart and soul❤️
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My pleasure🙂
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❤️
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Nydelig Lillian 💗
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Tusen takk Tonje❤️herlige deg, håper du har en fantastisk dag💜
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How do you make those paintings? i like them a lot❤️ the poem took my breath away CPR please😁 loved it, i started to imagine and it made me smile❤️
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Wow, that was quite a compliment, thank you so much Ilona❤️
Well, my painting is me, I can’t explain it better🦋I love your feedback when you tell me you started to imagine, because it is so inportant to me that my readers can feel it. Thank you❤️
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This is so evocative and lovely! So moving. I really feel the tension and passion!
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Awe, you filled my heart with joy, thank you so much🦋I am so grateful my words speak to you that way.
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As always Lillian! Great! I too am breathless! Oxygen please!!
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Awe, you filled my heart with joy you know, thank you so much🦋I really appreciate your time and feedback, and that my words speak to you like that- means more to me than you can imagine🦋
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This is deep.. nice one.. 🙂
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Thank you, I am glad you like it🦋It’s mean a lot to me you know.
I am so grateful for your support.
Enjoy🦋
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i was really able to visualize this! i love your work. im happy we stumbled upon each other x
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Awe, thank you so much, I really appreciate and you warm my heart🦋 Likewise Alyssa, and I wish you a great day❤️
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と・て・も
美しいポエムをありがとう(^^)
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Thank you🦋I really appreciate your feedback, it is mean a lot to me.
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