(Engelsk text after the Norwegian text)
Hun kan føle mørket kryper
oppover sin kropp
banker på hennes knokler
hennes hjerte full av tomhet stivner
hennes sinn snakker et
språk hun nå ikke forstår
hun vil føle kjærlighet
hun har så mye å gi
hun kjemper og vil ikke
visne bort
hun er ikke klar for å dra
hun flykter
fortiden vil alltid innhente henne
hennes mystiske side
venter på å bli oppdaget
alene med tankene sine
alene med sin sjel
alene i mørket med
sitt arr i hjerte
evig kontakt med mørket
-Orkidedatter-
//
The darkness
She can feel the darkness creeping
up her body
knocking on her bones
her heart full of emptiness freezes
her mind speaks a
language she does not understand
she want to feel passionate love
she has so much to give
She fights and does not want to
fade away
she is not ready to go
she escape
the past will always catch up with her
her mysterious side
waiting to be discovered
alone with her mind
alone with her soul
in the dark alone
with her heart of scar
eternal contact with the darkness
//
-Orkidedatter-
Absolutely loved it!!
Great piece, Lillian!
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I’m so grateful that you like this🦋thank you so much.
Big hug to you🦋
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great poem Thanks for share
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I am really gratefull for your feedback🦋thank you so much.
I hope you enjoy your day.
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great poem Thank you!
ありがとうございます(^^)
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Thank you so much🦋 I really appreciate your time and read.
I hope you have a wonderful day.
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Helt nydelig, som alltid – kloke deg 💜
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Tusen takk vennen💜jeg setter så pris på dine ord og tilbakemelding av den råeste dama jeg vet om, men kloke meg… DU❤️Håper du har en fin dag🦋klem
LikerLiker
I felt every line, when you said that the past always catches up with you, particularly. So deep. I am sure, all these words come from your soul ❤️
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You’re absolutely right. Every word is from the depths of my soul. I am so grateful that you write just these words🦋 It’s mean so much to me. Thank you so much.
Enjoy your day❤️
LikerLiker
This gives me goosebumps! 🙃
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Wow, that was quite a compliment🦋thank you, I really appreciate.
Enjoy your day.
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💜
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Beautifully penned, so hearfelt.
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Thank you so much❤️🦋I hope you have a wonderful day. I am grateful for your support🦋
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The pleasure is mine. You too have a lovely day.
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yo so norse is the course
if you can ahem fjord it
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Beautiful poem and I am so happy there was a translation lol. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
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Wow, thank you so much, I feel honored for your time to read and coment.
Take care.
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