Nobody knew how much she blamed
herself
she can’t breath in the end of the midnight
moonlight show her the path
she can’t get him out of her mind
one picture bringing back so
many memories
she can’t breath in the end of the midnight
she can hear the angels voice
a silent Lullaby
he is her univers
she is just a little human on earth
dancing with the moonlight shadow
mesmerized
faithless
pain – tasted blood
shoot her, the voice of the death said
she believe – hell is all she catch
the devils Lullaby is awakening
nobody gonna miss her
crawling on the floor
single bourbon on ice
a perfect storm in her head mixed with
a destroyed Lullaby on her jukebox
’cause this is where the country girl
slips away
she has bucked off.
-Orkidedatter-
Good stuff! I liked the closing line. «She was bucked off». Are you a country girl?
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Thank you, it means a lot to me… more than you can imagine…
yes, I am a country girl far in the forest…
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Sounds dreamy
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Yes, it is, many people say exactly the same words. It is a little farm too.
I have one friend and she sits on the couch dreaming away when she looks out the window …. 😀
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Sounds beautiful. I hope to have a little place out in the country one day. That would be really nice.
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I really hope all the best for you. You are still young my friend👏🏻😊it is peaceful here… Grateful to nature…
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I bet!
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i remember Renee An Only Friend in
College Younger than me looking for
a Friend a Man Trust Worthy Enough not
to Harm Her Fast Forward to her Twenties
A Revolver A Suicide in Her Father’s Bed
Images of a Mother Loved
By Two Children
And A Husband
A Woman i once
Dreamed to be a Potential
Eventual Wife of mine yet Destroyed
By The Cold Tool of a Father Before she
Reached Twenty Years Old.. And yes By
Grandfather too.. as a Vicious Cycle of Destroying
Souls oF LiGht With Tools of Greed and Pain to own
What is not Theirs Alive… so Many Other stories Half of
The Women in my Life who sought out a Different Light
Broomsticks of Uncle Dancing Little Nieces of Innocence
Oh the Pain
of Objects
only
tools
of Greed
And Hatred
of Rampage
Tools of Pain
And then the Hand
of that Fat Old Man who
Worked With my Wife who Put
His Hand on Her Leg too afraid to
tell me that i might Kill Him With my
Bare Hands.. smiles he did it while i was
Ill and shut-in i arose With The Strength of
Five and More Men His Size confronted him
in Public Just speaking i had been thinking about
him a lot lately letting him know for sure i knew
what he did with a firm handshake he will never
Forget with wonder of what might or could come next..
i have
no Room
For Bullies
i have no Room
for those Who Hate
With Fear and Rape
With Pillage The Shadow
that Lives at the Top of American
Politics for all to see and Copy of
the Dark Side of Humanity the ‘Men’
Who Kill with tools other wise Used
for Beauty of Love Men Who Never Grow
up Men who will always be less than Men Whole…
Smiles i was lucky my Father Left Early and My Mother Taught me
how to
be a Real
Man The
Grace and
Foundation of
Love all that Holds
the Will and Strength
of a Man Together Truly
Fearless unafraid to Give instead of Rape..
It’s true Lillian i am a Man yet i cannot erase
Images Images of those Who are Harmed by Never Men..
i will never be quiet i will never Stand Still When ‘Boys’ like that are Worshipped like God.
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This was a very strong read. I felt it depth in my heart. It is hard to swollow and a tear in my eyes is words from my soul that my mouth can’t tell❤️
I deeply appreciate your honesty and words from your heart.
Take care.
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SMiLes Lillian
Best to let
Pain Escape
And
Color Dark
With Living Light
At Best With Forgiving
Love
Above Below..:)
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Wise words, thank you😊
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Always
Welcome☺️
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Whenever I read your poems, I really forget that you don’t have English as your mother tongue. I mean, your control of the language and the words is so fluent.
The poem is amazing like each and every one of yours is. 😃
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Thank you my friend. Well, that is true and first write in Norwegian and translate to English is very challenging because the language loses much of its meaning … now I mostly write only in English and get help from people around me or from books ..but, ofcourse, I spend a lot of time on this…
I am so glad yoy like my poems, thank you so much❤️
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That was amazing to sit and imagine.. And look at the painting 😍 a women a teddy bear and lot more work in a single art ✨👏 Great work✍️ Not just ur words your brushes works also beautiful.
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Wow… that was quite a compliment. Thank you so much. I am both humbled and honored.
I am so glad you notice my art work, thank you.
I wish you a wonderful day.
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I just love the imagery of this poem, and I especially like the picture you posted with it. It is all so beautiful.
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This is a heartwarming comment, thank you so much. I am so grateful.
I wish you a wonderful day.
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Oh this is great to know you are a country 👧! 😊
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Thank you, you are so sweet🌸
Enjoy your day.
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Very touching and deep as usually dear Lillian! The struggle can be felt and the images are dawn so beautifully 👍 like your drawing I believe in the featured image 😊
Hope you are good and all is great at your end 😊❤️
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Hello, nive to se you❤️
I am so happy for your lovely and encouraging words.
It is heartwarming.
I hope you are well and make you a great day😊
I hope your vacation was wonderful.
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Thank you dear Lillian for your kind words 😊 I’m good thank you, hope you are good too
Vacation was great thank you, hope your weekend is great as well 😊❤️
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❤️
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fantastic
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I really appreciate it, thank you🌸
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