she feels like a ghost inside
yet sparkling eyes shining
as the rays of the midnight sun
that descend behind the mountain
she cries drops of glass that are crushed in
the ocean somewhere
where the waves roll up towards the beach
she looks at the horizon where clouds turn
into stars
an indescribable longing for an
indescribable memory for
an indescribable heartbeat
like a black rose that will never unfold
their rose petals
as a swan she bends her head in relentless
heartache
You don’t dare to touch her wrecked soul.
🦋
-Orkidedatter-
🤗💕
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Thank you🦋I really appreciate your read and time.
I wish you a wonderful day.
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My pleasure, hugs! ❤️
Also, did you read my new post 🤗
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Hugs back to you my friend.
If I have not liked or commented I have not, but I am on a blogvisit now so i drop by you, ofcourse my friend❤️
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Sure no problem 💕💕
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Abyss of Soul
ReTurNS
In Cat
Purrs
And Puppy
Dog Tail
Wags
Touching
What Mammals
Share Breast of HeART
Feeds off Spring Loving
LiVinG LoVE ToucH NoW
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Thank you my friends. Always a honored to read your poemamswer🦋
I wish you a wonderful day.
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SMiLes Poetry Speaks And
Connects Souls A Free Dance Does the SaMe
When Every Word We
Sing And Step We
Dance Becomes
Sacred And
Holy Full of
Meaning And Purpose
God BReatHES Effortlessly
WiTHiN Us in MiND
And Body Balance
Soul DarK Thru
LiGHT All
We View
The Face oF All
Namaste SMiLes
My FriEnd Thanks
For the Welcome i
Treat All of
Existence NoW as
God soMe sadly
Will not accept
My Thanks
And
Praise
For Living
Nature God SaME..:)
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Wow, where are you taking all those words from, thank you🦋
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Finished Version Below
i Have No REAL iDea
WHere this
Dance
And Song
Gift NoW coMes
From chances are
if i did it wouldn’t
Exist my Friend..
i KNoW
NoThing
THereFore i Feel
And Sense All (God) mY FRiEnD..:)
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Lovely🦋
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Thank You..:)
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My soul wants so much to hug that pain away! You touched me again Lillian!
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Awe, you are so kind to me my friend, thank you so much.
I never say no to a hug from a beautiful soul….thank you…
🦋
I wish you a wonderful day.
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❤❤🤗🤗
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Wonderful poem Lillian that touches the very heart of the reader. Have a wonderful trip today!😃🌞😺
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Awe, Steve, you are so kind, thank you so much. I deeply appreciate your feedback.
It means a lot to me that my words speak to you🦋
Thank you Steve, I will.
😺
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You are very welcome Lillian!😃😺
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Beautiful
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Thank you, I really appreciate your read and feedback🦋
Enjoy your day.
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SMiLeS NoW Poetry Speaks And
Connects Souls A Free Dance
Does the SaMe When
NoW Every Word We
Sing And Step We
Dance Becomes
Sacred And
Holy Full of
Meaning And Purpose Now
God BReatHES Effortlessly
WiTHiN Us in MiND
And Body Balance
Soul DarK Thru
LiGHT all in ALL
We View NoW
The Face oF All
Namaste SMiLes
My FriEnd Thanks
For the Welcome i
Treat.. All iN All Of
Existence NoW as
God soMe sADly
Will not accept
My Thanks
And
Praise
For Living
Nature God SaME NoW
Smiles my Friend A Final
Version of what you inspired
here.. i do not see anyone as
Less or More Incarnate of God
Secret of my Success in Happiness…
This Darkness You Speak of This Abyss
This Ghost of Soul Wandering the Earth Vaguely
Realizing one is the Living Dead i lived this Empty Place
for 66 Months if A Devil Will Escape Hell as me i Keep Hope
As Faith For
ALL oTHeRS
True
iN
Wisdom’s
BeautY iN LoVinG
All oF Existence God iNCaRNaTE NoW..:)
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Ops, mistyping…
🦋
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SMiLes..:)
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Great poem, Lillian. There are lots of wrecked souls out there, broken into pieces..
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Thank you, I really appreciate it.
I wish you a wonderful day.
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I’m touched. ❤
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Thank you, I deeply appreciate❤️
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Wrecked but beautiful and shining soul!
Touching poem dear Lillian 👌❤️
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Awe, it’s mean so much to me, thank you so much❤️
I am deeply appreciate it🦋
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My pleasure always ❤️😊
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Oh dear Lillian, another touching post from you…❤️
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Awe, you touch my heart❤️thank you so much.
I deeply appreciate it🦋
I hope you are ok and make you a great evening.
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Im reading your post Lillian, it is sad. Are you doing okay?
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Hello, Yes, no worries..I am fine, thank you. You touch my heart with your caring❤️I deeply appreciate it❤️you have a heart of gold my friend.
🦋
Hugs❤️
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I’m glad you are doing good. 🙂 🙂 keep your self safe always.
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❤️thank you, I deeply appreciate you are caring for me❤️you touch my heart.
🦋you too my friend.
Hugs
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Sending my virtual hug my friend 🙂
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Thank you❤️
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Lillian! «the midnight sun» – I always LOVE that image. How do you write so beautifully all the time?? So good!
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These words touched my soul❤️and I am speechless… but if you had seen me you would see my tears roll down my cheeks because I appreciate you so much …🦋thank you❤️
But, you know, I love your words too, and I have the same question to you when it comes to your words❤️
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Awwww you are so sweet! I’m so glad we’re friends and I can’t wait to read more! ❤️
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Thank you, me too, I hope you know that, I am so grateful to have met you here❤️
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I feel honored, thank you my friend❤️🦋
LikerLiker
Awesome poem.
I wish I will see some similar poems in the future too 😋❤
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Hello, and thank you for your kind words. I deeply appreciate it.
Yes, I have more poems to post and I have many words left to tell🦋
I wish you a wonderful day.
(I have instagram too… more poems..)
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You are welcome @ orkidedatter. 😊
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Beautifully penned. 👏👍
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Thank you so much, It’s mean a lot to me🦋
I wish you a wonderful day.
LikerLiker
I wish you the same. 😊
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This poem carries an edge to its story, all the way to the end. The wrecked soul is wondrously described before being identified at the end. Lillian, it was a great read.
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I am speechlees, that is how a great reader read the poem, thank you so much, I deeply appreciate it.
Enjoy.
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Good afternoon wonder Orkidedatter, another beautiful and meaningful poem, you are very inspired and inspiring person, like a black rose that will never unfold, my favourite line from the poem, thank you so much for being huge supporter on my blog, it means a lot to me, i’m very grateful, hugs, have a inspiring and meaningful weekend❤️
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Awe, you are so sweet and kind, thank you so much, I deeply appreciate it❤️
I will always support one of the most beautiful souls I know of, YOU.
You are always so honest, straight from the heart, talking about everything and seeing the good in everyone, you are always kind and nice and are always encouraging and have so much love to give to us here on wp.
I am so grateful that I met you here❤️
I wish you a wonderful weekend too.
Take care.
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Your words are so well crafted that I lost words. I don’t know, perhaps I have not reached that level to say anything except that I love this❤️
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Awe, I love you for it, because your kind words tell me so much about your reaction to my words. I deeply appreciate it❤️
Thank you so much.
LikerLiker
It’s always my pleasure ☺️
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