(English text after the Norwegian text)
Hun smuldret som varm ved i hans hender
hun plasserte den ene hånden
varsomt rundt nakken hans
hun kjente hans pust
hun følte hans bryst gikk opp og ned i takt
med hans hjerterytme
hun hvilte sine lepper nærme hans
hun følte hans ønske om
å måtte ha henne
hun hørte han sukket hennes navn
hun svelget og en herlig latter med
kjærlighet runget ut av hennes munn
et endeløs øyeblikk og hun mistet seg selv
i hans armer
hun la hodet sitt bakover og lot
han kysse henne dypt over halsen
og brystene
hans hender begynte å utforske hennes
kropp
med et smil om hennes søte lepper
og en eksplosjon nærmer seg
han griper hennes lange hår og drar det
bakover
ser henne dypt inn i hennes forgudede
øyne
og hun røver til seg hans ønske etter
henne.
🦋
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Desire:
She crumbled like hot wood in his hands
she placed one hand
carefully around his neck
she can feel his breath
she feel his chest went
up and down in
pace with his heartbeats
she rested her lips close to him
she senses his passion
longing to have her
she hear he sighed her name
she swallowed and a lovely laugh with
love got out of her mouth
an endless moment and she lost herself
in his arms
she laid her head back and faded
he kissed her deeply over her neck
and her breasts
his hands began to explore her body
with a smile on her cute lips
an explosion approach
he grabs her long hair and pulls it
backward
looks deep into her sparkling eyes
and she rip off his desire for her.
🦋
-Orkidedatter-
Another masterpiece Lillian! Again I am moved… I have no way to release the feeling’s this invokes! Long Day’s and Nights to be sure for me. Wonderful!
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Wow, thank you, seriously🦋you blew me away with your feedback and I am so grateful. I lost my words… but you really touch my heart.
A big hug to you, thank you🦋
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Hi. Lillan (^^)
Very good post, thank you everytime!
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Thank you🦋I am so grateful for your feedback. I wish you a wonderful day, you make my day.
Enjoy.
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Thank you very much!!
Lillian.ありがとう(^^)
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🦋
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Your artwork is stunning Lillian! I am captivated by it!
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You make me blush… your feedback means more to me than you can imagine🦋thank you so much from bottom of my heart. I am so grateful that my art and words speak to you like that.
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Så fin tekst 🙂 Det er gøy å skrive tekster av alle slag 🙂
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Det er kjempe gøy🦋tusen takk frodith, du er herlig❤️Det er også veldig godt å kunne variere på det jeg skriver. Ønsker deg en kjempe fin kveld🌸
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his chest went
up and down in
pace with his heartbeats…
That’s so beautiful and vivid!! So evocative. I love this so much!!!!
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Awe, you melt my heart🦋thank you so much. I am so happy that you like it. It means so much to me.
I wish you a wonderful day.
LikerLiker
fantastic poem
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Thank you so much, I appreciate it🦋I hope you have a wonderful day.
LikerLiker
Du er så dyp og det er så mange «ting» inni deg ♥️ Du skriver så vakkert og gir meg lyst til å lese mere 🌺 klemmer fra meg som ligger vannrett 😂♥️
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Awe, vennen❤️tusen takk🦋du varmer mitt hjerte. God klem til vakreste Tonje💖
LikerLiker
you illustrate such intense feelings with your words. beautiful xx
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Thank you so much🦋you warm my heart with your feedback, I am grateful.
I wish you a wonderful day.
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This is Beautiful.. Reading Erotic Poetry iS A Truly Holy And Transcendent
Experience And in Writing
It Hours Will Feel
Like Minutes
Truly the
Effect
Of Transcendence
Is Also Bio-FeedBack
To Master totally
Fulfilling
Happiness
Within
Really it
Should be taught
In Church Now as it
Is one of the Oldest
And Most Natural ways to
Become one With God
That isn’t over in less
Than 5 Minutes
Of
Human
Clock Time…
Very Few People
Understand the Full
Value in our Modern
Age And even if they
Do.. too
Many
Modern Distractions
To ever Visit God this
Way.. Mystics.. True
Mystics
Under
Stand
The Sacred
Nature.. Particularly
Sufi Mystics With their
Spiraling Dervish Dance
Too as We are Equipped
To See God
As one
Force Within
Inside Outside
Above So Below
And All Around
Just by Our Born-
On Nature of Who
We Truly are in
Freest Naked
Dance and Song Spiraling
Dance may also be Found
In Thoth’s Emerald Tablets too.. Just Free to
Be
Nature/God
Spiraling Finger
Prints Below Above
Smiles the only Real
Scientific Evidence
Of Precognition
Is after subjects
View Erotic Pictured
Cards.. it’s Simple it
Takes ‘em out of
Their Neo-Cortex
Puts ‘em in
Flow to
Reach the
Rest of God
Potential in a
Mind of Flow
Out of Neo-Cortical
Limiting Distance
Space and Time
In
Human
PriSons..:)
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Beautiful🦋thank you so much, I really appreciate.
Enjoy your day.
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Same to you my
Friend With SMiLes..:)
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🦋
LikerLiker
The art is gorgeous, but the words are soo sexy. 🙂 you know that you are good right? 🙂
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Than you so much🦋You touch my soul and warm my heart. I am so grateful for your kind words and that my words speak to you that way❤️I really appreciate your feedback on my heart, thank you so much❤️🦋
I have so much issues by thinking that I am good at it, I am an expert to talk myself down……
Therefore your kind words mean more to me than you imagine❤️
I wish you a wonderful day.
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Sorry I did not know that. If you need someone to talk too I am always here 🙂
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I know you didn’t, it is okei, I just wanna be honest with you❤️and thank you so much, I nearly cry now, because you are so sweet. I really appreciate your support. I am practice each day🦋
May I give you a big hug💜thank you🦋
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Sending a big hug to you my dear. I always ask a tight hug from my husband when Im tired. 🙂
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Thank you so much, you are kind🦋
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All the love poems you write are amazing especially the sensual ones ❤ the feelings and description are so amazing especially the pace you follow 🙂 Great share dear Lillian, I hope your week is great ❤
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Thank you, my friend, you warm my heart with your lovely feddback🦋I am so grateful. That is how a great reader reads my poem, thank you.
Have a nice day❤️
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My pleasure dear Lillian ❤️
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Beautifully written once again Lillian! You evoke such passion in your poems that makes them come alive. That is a beautiful picture as well, love your artwork, keep it up Lillian and have a nice day!
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You fill my heart with joy Steve🦋thank you so much. I am so happy for your feedback. Thats how a great readers read my poem, thank you🦋I am so grateful for your comment of my art.
Enjoy your day.
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You’re welcome Lillian and thanks!😄😸
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Wow, Lillian, this is so beautifully written, so sensual. You are a very talented poet. I also love all your artworks that accompany your writing.
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I am so thrilled that you like my poems, it means more to me than you can imagine🦋 Thank you so much, I am so honored, humbled and gratefull.
I am so happy that you interpret my art that you do🦋
Thank you.
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You are always very kindly welcome.
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