Souls of love…

(This post is only in English text).

Photo challenge:

Thank you so much Suki for recommending me to join this picture challenge. I couldn`t resist and have tried to write a poem.

Suki, who is baffledmum.com you are a great talent and I hope the world sees and reads you and they can feel far into their heart and souls how wonderful you are, both as a poet and a storyteller, how creative you are and as a fellow man. Thank you for sharing your wonderful words of love on your blogg.

The rules:

-150 word limit

– write a piece of historical fiction or poetry about the photo

– Try not to use the words tree & green

– Tag 3 people to do the same with the photo

Poem dikt souls of love norwegian blogger

He put his strong arms around her and she melted in his arms.

She felt his love and energy burn around in her body.

She felt safe as he surrounded her in nature’s own wilderness.

Only the two alone against the dangers of darkness.

Only the two alone against the longing for love.

Only the two alone against forbidden love.

His eyes told her about sorrow and pain.

Her eyes told him about unknown waters.

He makes her do things she thought she should never do.

She becomes a slave to his lovemaking.

They cannot remove each other’s heartbeat.

They throw away each other’s time.

Hope they will be happy in others’ arms one day.

They spend a lot of time on a battle that is already lost.

They tear each other’s world apart.

Their hearts bleed and their souls have caught each other.

They have given each other’s life to eternity.

-Orkidedatter-

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Feel free to continue this challenge with either a poem or historical fiction piece.

Let the world read ours word of love and heartbeat.

Thank you agan Suki, I really enjoy doing this, it was fun.

13 kommentarer om “Souls of love…”

  1. That was quite a powerful, moving poem! I think you captured a lot of truth there too about destructive loves. Thank you, Orchid Daughter!

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    Your English is good, OD, but Robbins uses a few words now and then that even many native American English speakers have to look up in the dictionary. If you read the novel it is sure to help you improve your vocabulary. It helped me! It’ll help you!

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    1. I really appreciate that you like, read and comment on my poem. Thank you so much for your time and it means more to me than you can imagine.🦋

      I try as best I can with the English, it’s not always easy. Sometimes the meaning falls completely away when I translate.

      I was a little unsure what to do now? but I have read the link. I am grateful for all the help I can get.

      I read in your post that the novell has sex scenes, and it goes just fine. I write erotic short stories and some of them are published in Norway. I find it very challenging to write this type of short story in English text.
      🦋

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    1. It’s like music in my ears when I read your feedback, thank you very much, I am very grateful for your time and your lovely words.
      Thank you for bringing sunshine into my day🦋
      You always touch my soul with your support🦋
      I wish you a lovely weekend filled with happiness🦋

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    1. Herlige deg Tonje❤️noen ganger blir det bare på engelsk, spesielt Awardser og utfordringer, men ellers prøver jeg å skrive på både norsk og engelsk, pga følgerne der ute i alle verdens hjørner, og det er koselig🦋
      Nyt fredagen❤️klem

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    1. Wow, I had to read your coment loud to my husband, we both were very touched by your feedback🦋 You warm my heart❤️thank you so much🦋
      I always love your writing too❤️

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